ext_19313 (
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2009-04-18 03:52 pm (UTC)
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I loved it! You wrote all the characters' reactions wonderfully. And I enjoyed Warren calling out Hank about not seeming concerned by the actual kiss itself - I got the impression Hank had to work out both his and Bobby's reactions simultaneously.
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