Again, utterly gorgeous. All these plot twists - eloquently written, wonderfully elaborated and, perhaps most importantly, utterly believable. I love that you're incorporating John, too - again, he's too often ignored for his own good.

BUT, I'm a stalker and I nosied around your profile and literally went HOLY CRAP THAT'S KYO SOHMA, a Fruits Basket fan? I'm friend-stalking you right away :D