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http://lyddieonwed.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lyddieonwed.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ficwize 2007-10-09 01:28 am (UTC)

“You’re going on a date with Gus?”
“Yeah!” Shawn grinned and bounced out of the bar before Juliet could react.
For a minute she just stared at the door where he’d left, then she waived down the waiter again. “I’m going to need a second drink.”
*giggles*
This was made of awesome. You kept it light throughout and captured their voices very well without getting lost in the dialogue. Very nice.

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