ficwize ([personal profile] ficwize) wrote2008-06-28 10:59 pm
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FIC: Wishful Thinking

Title: Wishful Thinking
Author: [livejournal.com profile] wizefics
Fandom: Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles
Characters: Sarah/Cameron
Prompt: [livejournal.com profile] geoncannon who asked for Sarah/Cameron and jealous the mood challenge; also written for the prompt dressing up for [livejournal.com profile] ghost_whisper at [livejournal.com profile] fic_on_demand.
Rating: Teen
Warnings: None.
Summary: “I do not understand why this dress is important.”
Disclaimer: I don't own Terminator, but I am so so excited for the next movie! Also, I don't make money doing this.
A/N: Written for day 28 of the June!Challenge at [livejournal.com profile] fic_on_demand.

As always, feedback is welcome and appreciated!

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Sarah let her hands trail down the cotton material of Cameron’s dress. “Hold still,” she ordered and the Terminator stilled obediently.

“I do not understand why this dress is important.”

“It’s for a school dance.”

“So it is an important social undertaking in a young person’s life.” Cameron sounded like she was reading from some manual and Sarah’s mouth tightened.

“Yes, it is.” She finished straightening the material and moved around to eye Cameron’s hair critically. “That’s the only reason that I am letting John attend.”

“It is illogical and not important to our mission.”

“It’s important to growing up and trying to be as normal as possible.”

“It’s abnormal,” Cameron fidgeted and Sarah held her still with a grip to her chin. Taking a brush, Sarah touched up a few strands of hair.

“Not when you’re human. You wouldn’t understand.”

“I’d like to understand.” Cameron frowned.

“A high school dance,” Sarah explained as she pulled a pair of earrings from her dresser drawer, “is a rite of passage. It about being with someone that you like, trying to sneak alcohol, kissing…” She pushed the earrings through Cameron’s ears, trying to ignore the soft skin under her fingers and the hair that brushed over the back of her hands.

“You are unhappy that we are going?” Cameron misread the signs she was reading from Sarah. “Your heartbeat is speeding up.”

“I’m not unhappy,” Sarah sighed, stepping back to look at the finished product and nodded. “Now get going before John leaves without you.”

“That would be illogical.” Cameron shook her head but did as she was told. Sarah followed her downstairs and watched as John and Cameron left for the high school dance.

Derek grunted from where he’d sat on the sofa and Sarah turned to look at him with a raised eyebrow. “Do you wish you were going?”

“I wish for a lot of things that will never be.” Sarah answered, before walking back upstairs to her room. Her fingers tingled.

[identity profile] worlddescending.livejournal.com 2008-06-29 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh. I like this. Understated and very in character, I think. I wish they were going to prom too! *sadface*

[identity profile] ficwize.livejournal.com 2008-06-29 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
Wow you were fast! *lol*

I just posted this a moment ago.

I'm glad you enjoyed this. I struggled with the idea of writing something where anyone is slashed with Cameron, but that's what made it so interesting. I'm going to have to revisit my hesitation.

I'm glad you said understated - I was afraid it might be boring! *lol*

ext_22444: Aisha Tyler and Milla Jovovich. No wonder there's steam. (Lena Headey Gun)

[identity profile] geonncannon.livejournal.com 2008-07-01 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is really amazing. Fantastic job with the prompt! I bow to you!

:D

[identity profile] ficwize.livejournal.com 2008-07-01 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad you liked it! I had fun with it. :)

Thanks for the prompt!

[identity profile] amilyn.livejournal.com 2008-07-01 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
Just gorgeous. I love Sarah's crankiness being focused on Cameron's dress, hair, etc., when it's really the whole world and its unfairness that she's angry at. You've done an excellent job showing her regret and resignation and commitment all in one small space.

[identity profile] ficwize.livejournal.com 2008-07-01 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I really fretted that I didn't get them right, so I'm relieved to hear that you got what I was going for.

:)

[identity profile] amilyn.livejournal.com 2008-07-01 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
I liked Cameron's lack of understanding of the significance, and the fact that she never got enough to be able to say "thank you for explaining"--because Sarah didn't!--and I admit I found her repeated use of the word "illogical" a bit Spock-like and thought she would have commented more of a, "Why would John leave?" or something that commented on the specific thing that Sarah said, but I just love it overall.

I think you NAILED both Sarah and Derek, especially with Derek watching silently, then commenting, and with Sarah, reliving, for a moment, both with anger and regret, a life that she lost only about a year after her own last high school dance. It's perfect, and the sadness and bitterness are excellent...along with Sarah's determination to make this taste of normal happen for *someone*.

[identity profile] charrua33.livejournal.com 2008-07-02 07:23 am (UTC)(link)
Wow...This is gorgeous on so many levels...Thank you.

[identity profile] ficwize.livejournal.com 2008-09-24 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And sorry for the horribly late reply.

[identity profile] karjens40.livejournal.com 2008-09-24 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
This was very very nicely done. I loved Sarah's last line. Any chance of a follow-up regarding what happens after the dance? Or Cam's thoughts during? Hm?

[identity profile] ficwize.livejournal.com 2008-09-24 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment and compliment.