Beta Needed: Sarah Connor Chronicles

Is anyone available to do a quick and dirty beta of a Sarah Connor Chronicles fic for me?

It's about 1000 words and while I would appreciate character insight, I'll settle for grammar and a general "this makes sense" check.

Thanks in advance!

FIC: Rebirth

Title: Rebirth
Author: wizefics
Fandom: Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles
Prompt: 90 - colorless at tamingthemuse; and the First Challenge at d_or_c.
Characters: Derek Reese
Rating: Teen
Warnings: None really - general spoilers for the series.
Summary: Derek can see the man he once knew in the boy before him.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything of note here and don't make money doing this.
A/N: Many thanks to hematite_lover for the beta. All remaining mistakes are mine!

As always, feedback is welcome and appreciated!

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