Those are the three words that best describe this right now.
Remy raised a lazy eyebrow. For some reason that was the sexiest fucking thing all chapter +_+
Your writing really came out this part. Did you say you wrote the other bits a while ago, and then came back to it? If so, it's really noticeable, because this one is such an improvement on the previous two. I want to quibble over akasha_lilian's questioning of Dean's tennis shoes, because I thought it was quirky, adorable and perfect.
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Date: 2009-05-13 03:52 pm (UTC)Those are the three words that best describe this right now.
Remy raised a lazy eyebrow. For some reason that was the sexiest fucking thing all chapter +_+
Your writing really came out this part. Did you say you wrote the other bits a while ago, and then came back to it? If so, it's really noticeable, because this one is such an improvement on the previous two. I want to quibble over