Beta Needed - Terminator Salvation

Can someone beta a quick fic for me? I'm very late for a ficathon and I mostly need a grammar/"this makes no sense" check.

Pertinent details, it's about 3500 words, rated PG (but keep in mind the setting?) and is very very loosely Marcus/Kyle.

THANKS!

FIC: But My Soul

Title: But My Soul
Fandom: Terminator Salvation
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Rating: Teen
Summary: Kyle needed Marcus and he didn't even know it.
Disclaimer: I own neither fandom and make no money doing this.
A/N: This is dedicated to i_want_2. I am *so so sorry* that I'm late. I stumbled into more than I could chew for a while in my personal life. I hope you enjoy this!

Many thanks to gega cai for the beta. Any remaining fail is because of me!

As always, feedback is welcome and appreciated.

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"Twas not my lips you kissed, but my soul."

~Judy Garland

( But My Soul )