Oh, this is awesome! Hank and Bobby tend to be the neglected members of the X-Men: First Class family (at least in fic), and I'm really happy to see the spotlight on them here. Your characterizations are great, especially Bobby, and I love how you worked all the characters in to this, as well as the lgbtfest-specific identity stuff. Great job!
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Date: 2009-04-17 05:09 pm (UTC)