I like the notes! You've got the tone right in them, and in the piece as a whole ^^
There's an unnecessary apostrophe ('other's') at the end, and you've put 'principal', when you mean 'principle', but they're easy mistakes to make and easy to fix, and it's a good fic overall ^^
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Date: 2007-12-16 10:05 pm (UTC)There's an unnecessary apostrophe ('other's') at the end, and you've put 'principal', when you mean 'principle', but they're easy mistakes to make and easy to fix, and it's a good fic overall ^^